Writing 201: Poetry Assignment 1; Haiku/Screens

October rhythm

Look up from your screen to see

The leaves are changing


5 thoughts on “Writing 201: Poetry Assignment 1; Haiku/Screens

  1. I really like the haiku form for the content you chose. It’s brief, so it mimics the single instant in which the person looks up from the screen.
    I also appreciate the juxtaposition between nature (a traditional topic for the haiku!) and modern technology.

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