Your poem is clever. Like a rising thermometer, it’s fun to read from bottom to top. And at the top is where it’s warmer, too, since you’re in California there and now. I imagine this is nostalgic as well. You were where you were, and you are where you are. The trappings of winter might have been pleasurable, and now they are no longer needed. Is there a sigh to hear? Thank you!
Thanks so much for taking the time to read it! I’m glad you thought it was clever, it took me awhile to decide how I wanted to shape it :). As for a sigh to hear, yes, definitely. However, not for a different location. I was thinking of last winter in California. It was extremely cold and I loved every minute of it. Despite the fact that I live in California and it’s practically summer year-round, I hate summer! California summers can be oppressively hot which makes for an uncomfortable season. I’ve always loved winter though! Thanks again!!
I used to live in San Diego, and I would go to places such as Palomar in order to enjoy the snow again. So I think I understand how you feel about missing winter. Thanks for the sharing!
Merry Moon 
I enjoyed this.
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Yay, I’m glad! Thanks for reading 🙂
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🙂 I enjoyed my visit there.
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Very creative poem! I cudnt muster any form at all 😉
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Thank you ! Even though your didn’t have a shape, it was nicely done, I liked it 🙂
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This is so cute 🙂
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Thanks hun 🙂
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You are most welcome 🙂
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Clever approach! 😉
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Thanks Melinda!
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You’re welcome
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Your poem is clever. Like a rising thermometer, it’s fun to read from bottom to top. And at the top is where it’s warmer, too, since you’re in California there and now. I imagine this is nostalgic as well. You were where you were, and you are where you are. The trappings of winter might have been pleasurable, and now they are no longer needed. Is there a sigh to hear? Thank you!
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read it! I’m glad you thought it was clever, it took me awhile to decide how I wanted to shape it :). As for a sigh to hear, yes, definitely. However, not for a different location. I was thinking of last winter in California. It was extremely cold and I loved every minute of it. Despite the fact that I live in California and it’s practically summer year-round, I hate summer! California summers can be oppressively hot which makes for an uncomfortable season. I’ve always loved winter though! Thanks again!!
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I used to live in San Diego, and I would go to places such as Palomar in order to enjoy the snow again. So I think I understand how you feel about missing winter. Thanks for the sharing!
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